At Hornby Primary School we have got new names for our classrooms. I am going to show you my writing about room 12's new name which is Tui. I hope that you like it and have a good day, bye.
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, June 22, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi scarlett
ReplyDeleteThe advice I will give you is that maybe you should add more facts about the Tui. Other than that, I really liked it.