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Friday, March 12, 2021

Writing

Hi guys, 

This is my writing that I did today.  Thank you for reading my blog.

I was on the road when I saw two men in a car one  of the men was wearing a red  mask and a big grey jersey. ‘’He looked  horrifying. The other guy looked terrifying with humongous lips . He was wearing a green hoodie.  He smashed his way out of the car and walked into the dairy like he was John Cena.



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1 comment:

  1. Mrs CassidyMarch 16, 2021 at 6:49 PM

    Good afternoon Scarlett.
    I'm glad that you included humongous lips-those lips were MASSIVE!.They reminded me of a letterbox.
    Using the name John Cena gives me the impression that the robber was tall and had muscles.Is this what the robber looked like or did he just walk like John Cena?.
    Have a great week and well done on your story recount.

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