Hello readers what could l do to improve my drawing? I have done it for the flower festival.
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, October 14, 2020
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Hi Scarlett. You have made a great start on your flower. I like that you have it on the same angle as the original. I think you could look more closely at the petals on the flower and make sure yours are separate individual petals that join at the base. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeletehello Scarlett.
ReplyDeleteYou have made a great start to your flower.There are a few pieces that you could work on.For example,curve the stem a bit so that it's not so straight and make the lines on the leaves slant outwards.
I do like the way that you have put some detail into the flower.It's going to look pretty amazing once you've finished it.