opening sentence for my story

Hey bloggers  

w.a.l.t. write an interesting first sentence to hook the our reader in.

My first sentence was It was a normal day

this is my improved sentence Pewpew the boy  is playing  video games  it was a normal  day  my mum got  a box.

scarlett, casper, myla algoritthm dance

Hello there readers, in room 11 we have been working   on a dance that is a algoritthm  dance  here it is .

treasure lsland

Hi everyone this my treas island  post we have been reading a  book about treasure island  we had to draw

       all the places captain  black patch went in the story. This is a link to my reading page. I feel good about my picture.